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David_Stuart's photo
Wed 12/06/06 11:51 AM

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I open the door,
To my heart you came in.
You showed me love,
Now I can only grin.

My barriers were high,
Were also tough.
You just showed me,
They werent stong enough.

I Stare at this picture,
Of what I have found.
I cry inside,
I just wish you were around.

I know I am strong,
I have no fears.
But if I loose you,
That will start those tears.

You dont have to worry,
I would never lie.
For you I know,
I would die.

To hold you in my arms,
For all of life.
One day I wish,
You might be my wife.

I dream of it,
So until that day.
I only have one wish,
That you will stay.







I LOVE YOU JACQUE

you told me you wanted me to post more so i am

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/06/06 11:57 AM
sweet words,she will enjoy them...M1313

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Wed 12/06/06 11:58 AM
SHE WILL STAY! THATS SWEET.GOOD LUCK DUDE

karmafury's photo
Wed 12/06/06 11:59 AM
Definitely gets across what you think and feel.

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Wed 12/06/06 12:00 PM
wow very touching i love the honesty in this great one

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Wed 12/06/06 12:29 PM
David..fantastic!!! Knows my girl gots a good one in you :)

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/06/06 12:44 PM
before y'all holler at me,it's ok...

you say you love her so,
love her well,let her know,
feel her heart,love you so,
be her sweet,feel it grow,
let her meet,and be your flower,
be her sweet,feel loves power!!!.....M1313

mimi420's photo
Wed 12/06/06 12:48 PM
Sweet poem David, I loved it so I know she will too!!! What girl
wouldn't?!?

David_Stuart's photo
Wed 12/06/06 12:48 PM
i like

David_Stuart's photo
Wed 12/06/06 12:49 PM
thanks guys

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 12/06/06 12:57 PM
Awesome it goes straight to the heart.

snacky's photo
Wed 12/06/06 02:40 PM
*tear* I love it! thanks babe :)

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/06/06 02:53 PM
Snacky???
hear ya got a reply?
where is it then???

snacky's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:39 PM
Michael? A reply? from who? i don't know what you're talkin about.. fill
me in please lol

Ontario's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:43 PM
Dude....this is no way to talk to a chick thats dumping
you...seriously....I bet this sappy crap would get her back.

damagedheart's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:45 PM
this is so nice and straight from the heart

Ontario's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:49 PM
Sorry dude....I meant, this sappy crap....will not get her back.

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Wed 12/06/06 06:04 PM
It's fantastic David :) you RAWK!!!

Ontario's photo
Wed 12/06/06 06:07 PM
....................Really................................?

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Wed 12/06/06 06:09 PM
Ontario plz for once be human...

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