Topic: Do I
Gryphyn's photo
Sun 12/10/06 03:35 PM
Do I wish to share this,
Peace I have inside.
I do wish to hold this,
Thing I cannot hide.

Do I wish to tell you,
What you do to me.
I do wish to hold you,
Closely next to me.

Do I wish to show you,
Friends that we can be,
I do wish to know you,
Gentle souls are we.

Do I wish to feel you,
Sharing lovers true.
I do wish to touch you,
Give my heart I do.

Do I know I love you,
Only time will tell
I do show I love you,
Try to do it well.

Do I tell I love you,
The way you want me too.
I do surely love you,
Forever none can tell.

iceprincess's photo
Sun 12/10/06 03:39 PM
very pretty gryph my most favorite yet

michael1313's photo
Sun 12/10/06 03:42 PM
well...do ya???lol
good words Gryph"......M.

sugargirl's photo
Sun 12/10/06 03:43 PM
Really good words!

sparkletheworld's photo
Sun 12/10/06 03:49 PM
Didn't think there could be one better than Jesse's, but....... it is an
awesome piece also!!

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 12/10/06 03:50 PM
As always Gryphyn your words do grab
on and pull us into your poems. Very
good indeed.

lionsbrew's photo
Sun 12/10/06 04:08 PM
thats a good poem man good stuff.

no photo
Sun 12/10/06 04:45 PM
love is such a place in heart to find, and you have made 'here'
a one of this kind........good words!!!!!!!

karmafury's photo
Sun 12/10/06 05:16 PM
Very good work Gryphyn