Topic: Passed away
GCLIFE's photo
Wed 02/06/08 02:32 AM
Pass me through judgmental eyes
Questioning my motives
Dismissing my tries

Pass me away before I die
Left to my own devices
The dreaded silent cries

Stoke the flames surrounding my heart
Lighted embers burning
Each breath so torn apart

Pass me over for I serve no purpose
So much to offer
All they see is the surface

I would give my eyes to make you see
The truth I speak
To set you free

I would give my lungs to secure your breath
But you would need more
In the face of my death

Passing time alone for the duration
that’s what you really want
I can sense the elation

Alone I speak with no one to listen
I was someone with value
Now empty and distant

The door to my kindness pried open and abused
Shredded to pieces
Destined to lose

Tomorrow hands a brand new sunrise
But I am long gone…..


Passed away before dawn

ChelleBelle's photo
Wed 02/06/08 04:04 AM
beautifully written Glen.....flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 02/06/08 04:12 AM
*sigh*


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(Stole them from your neighbor's girlfriend's yard and replaced them with plastic pinwheels.)

Lily0923's photo
Wed 02/06/08 07:03 AM
beautiful as always doll.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Wed 02/06/08 08:44 AM
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Beautiful,,, Just Beautiful

GCLIFE's photo
Wed 02/06/08 02:27 PM
Thank you all so much the kind words flowerforyou

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 02/06/08 06:02 PM

Thank you all so much the kind words flowerforyou


dammit G...that's better than mine ;)

you rawk G...another good one flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 02/06/08 06:24 PM
Now that was down right awesome very good.bigsmile

robinlynn42's photo
Wed 02/06/08 06:37 PM
:cry: flowerforyou flowerforyou

GCLIFE's photo
Thu 02/07/08 01:00 PM
Flattery will get all of you everywhere. flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 02/07/08 02:47 PM
flowerforyou :cry: flowerforyou