Topic: Heart Bleeder
Dreamweaverangel's photo
Mon 01/08/07 11:27 AM
Heart Bleeder

Shattered pieces of my heart
Left bleeding, on the ground
Whispers of a broken spirit
Silent crys, without a sound.

True love, with you, I fell
More deeply, to the pits of hell...

Because true love, now I see
Was never ever returned to me.

Like a game, with me, you play...
Is there more that I can say?

Nothing left but this bleeding dove...
You killed me, barely, with no love.

Take this pain from me, right now...
God teach me to love again, some how.

Forgive my Lover and me, please do,
For his love was never true.

Shattered pieces of my heart,
Left bleeding, nevermore...
Whispers of a broken spirit,
Through the clouds, forever, to soar.

....Dreamweaverangel {D.Raye A.}

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/08/07 11:45 AM
Awesome and very heart felt!

sherrie0527's photo
Mon 01/08/07 01:25 PM
wow seems as you wrote that for me! say pretty much what i have been
trying to write the last couple of days yet i could never finish it
...Thanks for letting me read this...~~SHERRIE~~

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Mon 01/08/07 01:27 PM
TY, Tx and Sher! Have a GREAT day!

Cybear's photo
Mon 01/08/07 03:43 PM
Here is another fantastic one by DWA.Completely heart rendering and
moving but spiritually uplifting for there is none greater than God
to ask this of.I pray that your request to him be granted.Beautiful
Poem!~DWA~ Godspeed!Cybear.

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Mon 01/08/07 05:55 PM
TY CYBER BEAR! I would love to e-mail you, sometime, but your profile
saids only certain people can e-mail you....watsupwithdat?

karmafury's photo
Mon 01/08/07 06:10 PM
Very, very nice.

Cybear's photo
Mon 01/08/07 06:36 PM
DWA please check your e-mail O.K.Cybear:)

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Mon 01/08/07 06:57 PM
TY, so much CYBear!

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Mon 01/08/07 09:29 PM
BLEED.....YESSSS OK

songbirrd's photo
Mon 01/08/07 09:35 PM
That was beautiful dream.But of course all of your poems are.=D

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Mon 01/08/07 09:39 PM
Bleed O bleed and wipe away the blood
There is an ocean and then a flood...
Many tears flow over, beyond control...
ALL the pain of life, takes it's toll.

Good bye to life...no where to turn...
All my friends, my life to burn...
Turn away, from my bleeding heart,
Begin again....again you'll start...


For YOU have life to live, on here
I, forever, forsaken in fear...
No more, my friends, return to me...
My mind is forever dead, but spirit, free!

.............My Pain ....Dreamweaverangel {D.Raye A.}

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Mon 01/08/07 09:40 PM
GOOD BYE!

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Tue 01/09/07 04:04 PM
Boy, I was drunk with that last one, fer sure! LMAO!