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The Shadow
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the shadow is nothing but a reflection of our thoughts and beliefs and as humans our first trait is to shift blame onto others and that is why we blame our shadow that it scares us but in reality its our own self we are afraid of .i do that too sometimes i blame my shadow for scaring me but in reality its my own dark thoughts i am afraid of and the shadow is nothing but a mirror image of us .just give it a thought once and thanks for liking the poem it means a lot
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Topic:
The Shadow
Edited by
harsh2019
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Thu 09/20/12 09:55 PM
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I am the Shadow that
follows you everywhere whether it be day or night i am like a protector sworn to protect you from all evil I am the shadow that follows you everywhere Some say im good some say evil some call me a knight some call devil i leave you in the daylight not bcoz im evil but because you have daylight to guide you i am not evil nor the devil i am not a knight nor an angel i am just your own shadowy self that follows and guides you everywhere hope people see the deep meaning behind this poem as the shadow is nothing but a reflected image of our own self.I just wanted to show everyone how the shadow feels . |
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~ live for the moment
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really amazing your writing has given me new hope and new inspiration to write something nice
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brilliance
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he is small but
he is wiser than us all he will rise one day and cleanse the world like God's priest he maybe small but he is wiser than us all looking forward to read another of your writing soon and hope the four lines i wrote are good |
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Fate is a tormentor.
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Looking forward to read another of your writing soon :)
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The Lost Child
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thank you so much Tazzops Queen123 Tayah and Up2us thanks so much for the comments and wonderful additions to the poem :)
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The Lost Child
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really amazing thank you Queen and Tayah this is a poem dedicated to all those children who get lost and hope they can be home someday
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The Lost Child
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really sweet and well its our poem now all thanks to the wonderful addition you made to it
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Azreal's Gift
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hehe you can call me harsh told you the names meaning as sometimes people think it the other way hehe but your poem was really nice looking for some tips on writing from you
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suicide ripples
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Give me some sunshine ,give me some rain
give me another chance i wanna grow up once again there is nothing called fair or unfair in life we only reap what we sow nice deep meaning poem keep writing thumbs up to you |
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Fate is a tormentor.
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All we do is blame the devil
whereas in us lies all evil fate is nothing but a mystery and tomorrow we will be nothing but history just do deeds and in your memory keep bcpz as you sow so shall you reap heehe this is what i came up with in few mins after reading your poem :) and keep writing the way u play with words is astounding |
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Sands of Reality.
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just keep writing because when u write in a rythm words come naturally to you :)
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Sands of Reality.
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nice and sweet just keep writing and posting here :) looking forward to read more of your writing again soon
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The Lost Child
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I am the lost child and
all i want is to go home i was a kid when i was lost and my memories are frozen. now i am the lost child and all i want is to go home At home all i used to play and i hope ill find my way At home i was like a king and all day i used to sing but now i am the lost child and all i want is to go home I miss my mother's lap and my father's clap i miss my toys and my bed my tears have made my eyes go red i am the lost child and all i want is to go home At home i used to eat all day and now i fight for a meal a day once i used to live like a king and now i am nothing but a beggar i live and live just in hope that somebody will find me as i am the lost child and all i want is to go home The grass is the bed and the sky is the roof for me i see nothing but light at the end of the tunnel and hope someday i will find home as i am the lost child and all i want is to go home hope this one is good its just raw ill edit it later and make some necessary changes please give me advice to make it better |
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~ paint
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wow nice and sweet :)
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Azreal's Gift
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very very very nice i have a lot to learn im still learning from all of you how to write very sweet poem please write again soon :)
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Azreal's Gift
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very very very nice i have a lot to learn im still learning from all of you how to write very sweet poem please write again soon :)
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Topic:
titanic
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it was the first hollywood movie i saw after Titanic and both these fims inspired me to watch more of hollywood movies as a teenager
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Topic:
As I Lay Dying...
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just let ur emotions flow
and ur poem will glow just keep on writing so that we may get to read more :). |
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Heavenly Memories
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its in raw form need advice to make it better
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