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Topic: My Beautiful You
MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Fri 10/03/08 09:45 AM
I try, so many attempts Seems unless I am broken and torn The words tend to hide, my heart remains still Battered, beaten and worn Sadness crippling me to the point of emotions release Were how my words happened to be Suddenly a changing moment The day you came to me I slept as the moonlight cast it's blue darkness Against the midnight dew Words lurking about in my mind as I slumber Dreaming of My Beautiful You Awakened one crisp morning With this smile upon my face The joy in my heart noticing sunshine All darkness is now erased KLS 10-03-08

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Fri 10/03/08 09:47 AM
nicely written

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Fri 10/03/08 09:51 AM
nicely written Thank you sweety

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 10/03/08 10:04 AM
Yesssssssssssssssss Nice indeed

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Fri 10/03/08 10:05 AM
Yesssssssssssssssss Nice indeed Thank you...means a lot coming from you

Havaman Joined Sun 08/03/08 Posts: 426	Fri 10/03/08 10:09 AM
KIMMY....!!!!!! Beautiful Hon...really beautiful! Writers block ...my rear!!! Wow...what a come back.... Girl...get back on that book!!

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Fri 10/03/08 10:12 AM
KIMMY....!!!!!! Beautiful Hon...really beautiful! Writers block ...my rear!!! Wow...what a come back.... Girl...get back on that book!! Thank you Darlin'

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Fri 10/03/08 03:33 PM
May you find love and light!

AtrueOne Joined Fri 04/04/08 Posts: 1258	Fri 10/03/08 04:27 PM
Very very nice

BrooklineBaby Joined Sun 04/27/08 Posts: 469	Sat 10/04/08 09:21 AM
That was just so incredibly warm and beautiful!! Your expression of love and the quiet peace and serenity emanate (eminate!) from your flowing words....... One of the persons posted that you may be writing a book??? If your poems are ANYWHERE NEAR as lovely as this one-you'll be a certain best seller, and PLEASE let me know if/when it would be published-I'd purchase it in a heartbeat........ Will be watching for more of your posts Just wonderful MisKim.......

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 10/04/08 09:57 AM
"I slept as the moonlight cast it's blue darkness Against the midnight dew Words lurking about in my mind as I slumber Dreaming of My Beautiful You Awakened one crisp morning With this smile upon my face The joy in my heart noticing sunshine All darkness is now erased" Oh darlin', that is awesome....Bravo!

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Sun 10/05/08 06:24 AM
BB and Angel...your words have brought tears to my eyes...I am very humbled...thank you so much

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76360	Sun 10/05/08 07:31 AM
At times words are merely lurking within trying to escape but not knowing how to. Then we are given a ray of sunshine and the words tend to flow like a river. May your ink well never run dry, very nice write.

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Sun 10/05/08 09:01 AM
Kim... Just beautiful honey, I LOVED it!!!

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 10/07/08 03:17 PM
Txs Gal and Joanne...thank you both so very much

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 10/07/08 03:28 PM
Excellent Write!

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Wed 10/08/08 07:42 AM
Excellent Write! I am himbled

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