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Topic: Of Words~
Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 07/28/12 05:54 AM Edited by Leigh2154 on Sat 07/28/12 05:58 AM
Of Words~ It wasn't clear at first Pages later I began to see The powerful thrust Of a mind reminding me of me… Kinetic pull so strong I feel helpless to undo What lies smoldering Between me and you…. Wants and needs raging Against the prince of tides Thoughts cascading Between willing thighs…. This strength you have laid Upon my body and my mind Penned as if by my hand guided Etched into the sands of time… Take no offense nor worry For all that I dare speak Stay safe within my heart and soul Love is not for the meek…. © 2012

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sat 07/28/12 10:08 AM


mg1959 Joined Thu 04/05/07 Posts: 7872	Sat 07/28/12 12:44 PM
passionate to the core my lovely one

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 07/28/12 02:56 PM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 07/28/12 02:56 PM
passionate to the core my lovely one

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 07/28/12 04:36 PM


bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 07/28/12 05:46 PM
any write that has 'smoldering', has my attention :) this is classy, passionate and hawt, love it leigh!!

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 07/29/12 04:33 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 07/29/12 05:27 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 07/29/12 05:29 AM
any write that has 'smoldering', has my attention :) this is classy, passionate and hawt, love it leigh!! Speaking of smoldering, your invitation awaits you! Satan says get her here!!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 07/29/12 05:30 AM
((((( Tazz!! ))))) Thank you!

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sun 07/29/12 11:01 AM
I must as always my friend show my face to your amazing words,

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 07/29/12 11:51 AM
I must as always my friend show my face to your amazing words, Thank you Rich ...Are you writing today?

ChristTrueServant7 Joined Sat 07/28/12 Posts: 15	Sun 07/29/12 12:29 PM
Very well done, passionate with a great rhythm and terrific choice of elements (or nouns). Don't stop writing, God bless

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 07/29/12 12:36 PM
Very well done, passionate with a great rhythm and terrific choice of elements (or nouns). Don't stop writing, God bless Welcome to Mingle CTS!..I see from your profile you are a poet...Great news!...Looking forward to reading you!.. Thank you so much for reading and commenting..

laura329 Joined Tue 10/13/09 Posts: 112	Sun 07/29/12 02:41 PM
I really enjoyed this Leigh

preachergirl Joined Thu 07/26/12 Posts: 38	Sun 07/29/12 06:37 PM


manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Mon 07/30/12 02:19 PM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 07/30/12 05:18 PM
i just wrote ooolala on another poem...my wrd for here too...ooolala!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 07/30/12 05:37 PM
I really enjoyed this Leigh Hey Laura! .......Thanks for reading!

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