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I walked away from all that seemed good
yet looking back there was only misery staring in my face screaming delusion Crying never became a part of that life no tears shed, nor remorse or regrets only gratitude for avoiding intrusion Promises made and broken as future laid plans dispersed in the atmosphere where time and space were pure illusion Soul searching and heart filtering uncovered the reality of who was laying sheltered yet hidden beneath confusion Wisdom gained from backward glances propel you forward where the New beckons with doors wide open finally a conclusion Blind faith rose and carried back home the one who mattered most in this catacomb of life ME... © Ainjel 2012 |
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i love this structure. I'm hearing music. A woman with deadpan eyes is singing it with special emphasis on each ending.
I especially like this last part Blind faith rose and carried back home the one who mattered most in this catacomb of life ME... There is only one person you can truly count on. It's the dirty truth. |
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I smell cheese
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Nice write....
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 nice write
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 Again, Ainjel, another that allows me to look deeper to see… how unfair life can be when we lean one way and get pushed in another… but ultimately, discovering the truth and being good to ourselves is what keeps us moving forward…
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I walked away from all that seemed good yet looking back there was only misery staring in my face screaming delusion Crying never became a part of that life no tears shed, nor remorse or regrets only gratitude for avoiding intrusion Promises made and broken as future laid plans dispersed in the atmosphere where time and space were pure illusion Soul searching and heart filtering uncovered the reality of who was laying sheltered yet hidden beneath confusion Wisdom gained from backward glances propel you forward where the New beckons with doors wide open finally a conclusion Blind faith rose and carried back home the one who mattered most in this catacomb of life ME... © Ainjel 2012 I love this! Really really love this! |
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Edited by
Ainjel
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Fri 12/21/12 05:21 AM
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Thankyou DaySinner, and yes at the dirty truth that you are the only one you can count on..♥
Thankyou Up2..Happy Holidays..♥ Thankyou Penny..Happy Holidays..♥ Thankyou Athena, life can be complicated if you let it, as can love but truth and moving forward is always the best outcome in life..♥ Thankyou Mig, you inspire me always..♥ Thankyou Tazztops..♥ & |
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Ainj, so happy that you have traveled your path and come out whole...Reaching closure is actually reaching openings
...To a tranquil New Year  |
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well, I didn't have to wait very long...
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Ainj, so happy that you have traveled your path and come out whole...Reaching closure is actually reaching openings ...To a tranquil New Year Thankyou..♥..Has been the best journey ever...All the best for the New Year Leigh..
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well, I didn't have to wait very long... Hey I surprised myself too when the words fell out of my head...haha...Cheers KC..♥ |
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I enjoyed this read and could relate to parts of it (without sadness). A very good write Ainjel. Even better that it sounds as though the New Year may an easier one, with new paths for you to follow
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Thankyou Penny..Happy Holidays..♥ Hope you have a Merry Christmas, and a blessed New Year Ainjel
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I see you
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what order!!! i'm in love with your work
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so nice to read you ainjel :) i enjoyed the truth in this, very nice.
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I've read this about half a dozen times over the past few days and couldn't really think of a comment. It's just... really, really beautiful and I love it, Ainjel.
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Ainjel...this has heart...
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