Topic: Next Time
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Mon 09/22/08 06:29 AM
Next time --
Next time you need my help
To pull you out of a bad situation --
The bad decisions, a life of pain --
Just say so
Don't dress it up
Don't pretend to be interested when you're not
Don't create illusions of false feelings
Don't try to lead me on with insincere stories --
Beautiful words, written so perfectly,
So emptily --

Pretty lies
Wrapped around an ugly truth
Don't make anything easier
Don't help anyone
Because the lies, pretty as they may be
Are, in the end, even uglier
Than the ugliest of truths

And if you're even wondering,
Yes, I still love you
And I'd do it again
If that's what you need --
This is who you are
This is what you do
I'd be foolish to expect anything else from you
But I'd appreciate a little honesty
Next time --


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Mon 09/22/08 06:32 AM
I'd be foolish to expect anything else from you




we are all fools from time to time, no?

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Mon 09/22/08 06:36 AM

I'd be foolish to expect anything else from you




we are all fools from time to time, no?


Yes. And some of us have gotten quite good at it.


MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 09/22/08 06:46 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:32 AM

Next time --
Next time you need my help
To pull you out of a bad situation --
The bad decisions, a life of pain --
Just say so
Don't dress it up
Don't pretend to be interested when you're not
Don't create illusions of false feelings
Don't try to lead me on with insincere stories --
Beautiful words, written so perfectly,
So emptily --

Pretty lies
Wrapped around an ugly truth
Don't make anything easier
Don't help anyone
Because the lies, pretty as they may be
Are, in the end, even uglier
Than the ugliest of truths

And if you're even wondering,
Yes, I still love you
And I'd do it again
If that's what you need --
This is who you are
This is what you do
I'd be foolish to expect anything else from you
But I'd appreciate a little honesty
Next time --




This is fabulous, Lex.
Honestly.

:wink:

it just so happens...i was working on
a complementary thought

Next time --
Feed me not, oh my love,
A diet of lies

:smile:

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 09/22/08 07:48 AM
Good one Lex sad but true that some will lead you to believe that they need you. But what they fail to reveal it is only until they get their thoughts together again...........

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Mon 09/22/08 08:00 AM
the stories you tell
the wants you need
are dressed to please
but just not me

great write by the way:smile:

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Mon 09/22/08 08:09 AM
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d4tc's photo
Mon 09/22/08 08:17 AM
shades
Strong. Heartfelt. Great write from top to bottom.
:thumbsup:

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Mon 09/22/08 10:15 AM
What an amazing write Lex!flowerforyou

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Mon 09/22/08 01:01 PM
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Mon 09/22/08 06:19 PM
flowers
{{{{{Lex}}}}}
Good write! To Honesty!