Topic: To Be
iceprincess's photo
Sat 01/27/07 08:03 PM
I stand upon my lonely shore
I look out over the waves
I hear them crash upon the rocks below me
i feel the surf upon my skin

I wonder how i came to be hear
alone,afraid,insignificant
I wonder what i ever did
to deserve this isolation

As I feel the tears run down my cheeks
As i feel my heart almost seem to crack
I clench my soul against the pain
I steel myself against the hurt

I realize this is only temporary
I realize I will live again
i will love again
i will BE again

karmafury's photo
Sat 01/27/07 08:06 PM
Ice that's beautiful and touching. You won't be alone for long.

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/27/07 08:10 PM
may your words shine into your life,
to warm your heart as they have mine...

very nice Princess...smokin

no photo
Sat 01/27/07 08:12 PM
Ice, that was truly beautiful and touching, I do agree with Karma.

Patience sweetie, you and I know that these kinds of stuff take
patience.

iceprincess's photo
Sat 01/27/07 08:13 PM
Thanks Karma we shall see.

iceprincess's photo
Sat 01/27/07 08:14 PM
Fine unfortunatly god forgot to bless me with that virtue.LOL


Micheal thanks I'm glad you liked it darling.

no photo
Sat 01/27/07 08:26 PM
Ice, sweetie, that is why sometimes we have to learn it the hard way.

Remember, I have a month and 1 week to go.

iceprincess's photo
Sat 01/27/07 08:32 PM
Iknow I know he's been trying to teach me over the last year. can we
tell him i got the picture already.bigsmile

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 01/27/07 09:11 PM
Ice that was very heartfelt and I know right
were your coming from even tho all say with
patience and time it will happen well actually
I have about ran out of the patience and ready
to give up on the time lol.

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/27/07 09:16 PM
never give up!smokin

brutis's photo
Sat 01/27/07 09:22 PM
there right don't give up I know keep up the good work

LAMom's photo
Sat 01/27/07 09:30 PM
Ice, that was really beautiful

Cybear's photo
Sun 01/28/07 06:23 PM
And that you shall,for as long as hope and faith are maintained,then we
shall Be Again!,and we will prevail.May God hold us gently and guide us
with his mercy for all our days upon this Earth.Godspeed!Cybear.
:smile: flowerforyou

ToyotaGirl's photo
Sun 01/28/07 06:35 PM
Great poem Sis, it's about time you started writing again and this time
don't ever let anyone or anything prevent u from doing it again.

:heart:

niceguy4u79's photo
Sun 01/28/07 07:55 PM
Thats really nice darling i hope to see you post some more.

venusrose's photo
Sun 01/28/07 08:02 PM
Yes you will. Very nice. Looking forward to reading more of your
poetry.