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Topic: If I Lost...
Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 06/03/08 09:16 AM
If I Lost... If I lost... The limbs, that help me walk to you, Would you still love me And carry us through? If I lost... The limbs, that I use to embrace your heart Would you still love me And keep us from tearing apart? If I lost... The voice, that expresses my love Would you still love me And everything I'm made of? If I lost... My sight, that gazes upon your beauty, Would you still love me And guide me with duty? If I lost... My mind, and forget who you are Would you still love me And remind me you're my star? If I lost... The will to live, and to keep going on Would you lift me up And bring my heart home? How dedicated are you my dear To the love we once knew, Would you carry us on, being strong With all you can do? Would you have an undying love No matter what the cost, Keep us going and staying strong If I lost...?

crazy_lover Joined Tue 03/18/08 Posts: 444	Tue 06/03/08 09:18 AM


SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Tue 06/03/08 09:18 AM
Bravo, maestro!!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 06/03/08 09:19 AM
Bravo, maestro!! Thank you Suz...that's the first time being called maestro. Thanks Crazy...glad you liked it.

SCURLOCK Joined Tue 03/11/08 Posts: 216	Tue 06/03/08 09:20 AM


mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Tue 06/03/08 09:25 AM
well done my friend!!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 06/03/08 09:29 AM
well done my friend!! Thank you Marc...I've always wondered if true love existed, would someone stay with you through any or all of these mishaps in life. Or would they just walk away? Thanks again. Thanks Scurlock...glad you liked it, I think.

Silkbutterfli Joined Mon 07/30/07 Posts: 1008	Tue 06/03/08 09:35 AM
That was wonderful. Makes you wonder if there is someone that would do all that for another. One can always hope that there is someone out there that would. When you find them and they are willing to stay through it all, that is when you know you have found true, spiritual love.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 06/03/08 11:36 AM
You have such a brilliant mind.I have wondered that myself.After my sister had her brain aneurysm everyone thought her husband would leave.But he stayed and does most everything for her, that is true love.And if it happened to me I would stay also because true love is found on the inside.Wonderful write

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 06/03/08 11:42 AM
Beautiful write Robert. Now I keep picturing you in white tails bowing down to accept your applause.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/03/08 12:44 PM
Really tests the nature of true Love...

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Tue 06/03/08 01:37 PM
((((((((((((((My bro))))))))))))))))) you never sieze to amaze me!!! Love your writes

Britty Joined Sat 09/08/07 Posts: 3480	Tue 06/03/08 05:40 PM
wow, just beautiful.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Tue 06/03/08 07:37 PM
Very well written, (((Robert)))!! I love that one! I would do all of that for the one I love!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 06/03/08 07:47 PM
(((((( Robert )))))))) For all Eternity,, My Love is with you

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Tue 06/03/08 09:55 PM
Wow

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 06/04/08 10:09 AM
That was wonderful. Makes you wonder if there is someone that would do all that for another. One can always hope that there is someone out there that would. When you find them and they are willing to stay through it all, that is when you know you have found true, spiritual love. That's what I've always wondered myself and hope one day, I will find that true love, who will stay with me no matter what. Thanks Teri... Pammie...that is true love what your sister and her husband have and that too is what I want. Maybe we will discover that as well. Pam (pkd)...Me in a tux taking a bow...awww now that is right up there with Suz calling me maestro. Ya'll are too kind. Yes Angel, those are the tests that most sometimes fail. The ones that pass, are the ones that have eternal love and true love. Thank you for your hearts sweetie. Ali my sis...I'm glad I amaze you. Sometimes my mind can put some good stuff out there. Glad you loved it. Keep in touch more. Susan, glad you liked it as well sweetie. Erica, I know you would. I can tell in your voice you would be that dedicated. Denise...As my love for you will always be there (((((Dee))))) Calm, glad you were impressed.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 06/04/08 10:26 AM
That was absolutely beautiful!!!!! Applause and a standing ovation my friend!!!!!!

screaMNchic Joined Sun 11/04/07 Posts: 479	Wed 06/04/08 10:27 AM
that was wonderful... thanks for sharing

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 06/04/08 10:34 AM
That was absolutely beautiful!!!!! Applause and a standing ovation my friend!!!!!! WOW all this and a stand O...where is that tux Pam?? I didn't realize this one would go over that well. Thanks screamin..glad you liked it as well.