Topic: Romance in the Mist
sparkleplenty424's photo
Fri 08/15/08 02:17 PM
I’ve been chasing romance that’s been over at length
I should give it up, but I don’t have the strength
The memories haunt me, they pervade my dreams
But nothing is ever what at first it seems
I cling to a notion of true love for me
And my mind has confirmed that it’s not meant to be
But my heart won’t accept that it does not exist
It hides from the truth while it’s deep in the mist
It won’t dare to look at the facts plain as day
If it does, it will die and just wither away
So it clings to the notion that love is still real
It refuses to break, so it won’t have to heal
I don’t know how long I can protect my heart
When the truth finally dawns, it will just break apart
And so I continue to think I am wanted
If I really believe it, my dreams won’t be haunted
But the truth trickles in, just like acid it burns
The mind understands, but the heart never learns

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Fri 08/15/08 02:19 PM
that is so beautiful it made me tear up.Love is a gift that when found should be cherished

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Fri 08/15/08 02:21 PM
Bravo!!! You sure have the feelings nailed!! flowerforyou

flame1cutie's photo
Fri 08/15/08 02:22 PM
That was very beautifulflowers flowers

sparkleplenty424's photo
Fri 08/15/08 02:22 PM
You are both very kind.flowerforyou

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Fri 08/15/08 02:23 PM
you have a very lovely way with words keep it up

sparkleplenty424's photo
Fri 08/15/08 02:24 PM

you have a very lovely way with words keep it up
Thanks for the encouragement.

you are all very kind.

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Fri 08/15/08 02:31 PM


you have a very lovely way with words keep it up
Thanks for the encouragement.

you are all very kind.


Perhaps you are being gracious or perhaps you don't see it.... YOU REALLY DO HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS!!! These poems have been just lovely. I'm jealous, in a good way!! flowerforyou

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Fri 08/15/08 02:36 PM

It refuses to break, so it won’t have to heal

Exceptional gift you have. I loved your poem.
I understand all too well. Wonderful in every way.flowers

sparkleplenty424's photo
Fri 08/15/08 02:59 PM



you have a very lovely way with words keep it up
Thanks for the encouragement.

you are all very kind.


Perhaps you are being gracious or perhaps you don't see it.... YOU REALLY DO HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS!!! These poems have been just lovely. I'm jealous, in a good way!! flowerforyou
well perhaps, but you are still kind.

sparkleplenty424's photo
Fri 08/15/08 03:01 PM


It refuses to break, so it won’t have to heal

Exceptional gift you have. I loved your poem.
I understand all too well. Wonderful in every way.flowers
We have all been there at one time or another, I guess.

MirrorMirror's photo
Fri 08/15/08 03:07 PM
niceflowerforyou

sparkleplenty424's photo
Sun 08/17/08 06:52 PM

niceflowerforyou

thanks, Mirror.flowerforyou

HMontana's photo
Sun 08/17/08 07:20 PM
flowers So much revealed in the written word that often cannot be spoken. Beautiful write!

missy51970's photo
Sun 08/17/08 08:26 PM
Wonderful.....flowerforyou

tashieanna's photo
Wed 08/27/08 01:03 PM
your words where heart felt its truly something how even though we tell are selves that there's know hope are heart's are still willing to try

AngelLight's photo
Wed 08/27/08 01:15 PM
Very well done ~ heartfelt and human flowerforyou :heart: