Topic: Before Not
Sharris's photo
Wed 05/27/09 05:24 PM
Before Not

A time before, not too long,
in the scheme of eternal and distance,
she took her usual place on the rock.
The tide could not touch her
for she had chosen this place
to keep her from getting her feet wet,
unless it was her mood to do so.
From her vantage point she surmised
life as only she would know.
From a distance unknowingly,
she was observed.
The same question came to mind
of he who had been viewing her usual.
Why does she sit there, day in and day out,
no matter the sky, no matter the season?

Not has held her captive,
Even from the waves.
Who can know to save her?
She sits upon her grave.

Raine Les 5/27/2009



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Wed 05/27/09 05:42 PM
{{{:wink:}}}:heart: flowers If U cont.w/ this style of writing U will have me behind my quill again in no time.laugh Much Luv & Godspeed!Cy:smile:

Sharris's photo
Wed 05/27/09 06:14 PM
Edited by Sharris on Wed 05/27/09 06:36 PM

{{{:wink:}}}:heart: flowers If U cont.w/ this style of writing U will have me behind my quill again in no time.laugh Much Luv & Godspeed!Cy:smile:


Steven,

Come

Come when the wind
has gifted you breath.
Respite is needed,
a rest from the quest.
Where no time can tear
away from the season
Only where soul's
nurture has reason.

Raine Les 5/27/2009

no photo
Wed 05/27/09 06:37 PM
<3~Sorrowful Tears Turned To Joy~<3

Her radiance is beaming as I dreamily stare
Her whispers have fallen with love and care
Such heartfelt yearning while sitting alone
Faithful are my ears for her miniscule tone

I listen ever closely for her gental sighs
Falling from her eyes,salty tears were cried
Weakened & weeping from a past that had died
Too little of joy,and many filled with lies

Tonight sweet tears fall as if they were rain
Waves cascade over her as her new day is born
Her profound sadness once felt now has gone
No more does her heart leave sorrow nurturing

Listen closely;can U hear the birds chirping?
Such melodic sound carried within their flight
A warm blanket of air caresses her skin toniht
The tides of soothing calmness washes over her

Her evening tears have now become a sea sponge
Trapped endlessly upon the harsh baking sand
No longer shall she ponder sorrow perpetually
Time falls mercifully quick when allowed reign

She welcomes a new day as the sun gently rises
A majestic rainbow curls & hovers over the East
The seagulls yelp & dip endlessly within ritual
Steadfast and faithfully overlooking the ocean

My heavenly sight;few will ever witness sadly
A gentle breeze carries her soft loving whisper
Longing for a gentle man to capture her heart
Her smile casts a glow for a starking distance

I stand before her naked,drenched and cleansed
A glorious new beginning racing to wards them
I am not faint at heart as I embrace her whole
2 fearless hearts,minds & bodies upon 1 journey

Lovingly written by CyPoet aka Cybear 3/14/07
:smile: flowerforyou {{{{bear~hug}}} ;=)

Sharris's photo
Wed 05/27/09 06:45 PM

<3~Sorrowful Tears Turned To Joy~<3

Her radiance is beaming as I dreamily stare
Her whispers have fallen with love and care
Such heartfelt yearning while sitting alone
Faithful are my ears for her miniscule tone

I listen ever closely for her gental sighs
Falling from her eyes,salty tears were cried
Weakened & weeping from a past that had died
Too little of joy,and many filled with lies

Tonight sweet tears fall as if they were rain
Waves cascade over her as her new day is born
Her profound sadness once felt now has gone
No more does her heart leave sorrow nurturing

Listen closely;can U hear the birds chirping?
Such melodic sound carried within their flight
A warm blanket of air caresses her skin toniht
The tides of soothing calmness washes over her

Her evening tears have now become a sea sponge
Trapped endlessly upon the harsh baking sand
No longer shall she ponder sorrow perpetually
Time falls mercifully quick when allowed reign

She welcomes a new day as the sun gently rises
A majestic rainbow curls & hovers over the East
The seagulls yelp & dip endlessly within ritual
Steadfast and faithfully overlooking the ocean

My heavenly sight;few will ever witness sadly
A gentle breeze carries her soft loving whisper
Longing for a gentle man to capture her heart
Her smile casts a glow for a starking distance

I stand before her naked,drenched and cleansed
A glorious new beginning racing to wards them
I am not faint at heart as I embrace her whole
2 fearless hearts,minds & bodies upon 1 journey

Lovingly written by CyPoet aka Cybear 3/14/07
:smile: flowerforyou {{{{bear~hug}}} ;=)

Ohh, you know so well..

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Wed 05/27/09 06:53 PM

Sharris's photo
Wed 05/27/09 07:34 PM



thank you

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/27/09 08:26 PM
nicely done...both of you...bigsmile

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Thu 05/28/09 06:48 AM
two wonderful writes full of heart and emotionflowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelFireDream's photo
Thu 05/28/09 06:59 AM
I like this one. flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Thu 05/28/09 07:29 AM
flowerforyou drinker

MzEm's photo
Thu 05/28/09 08:12 AM
Oh Wow...flowerforyou

JosefQuewl's photo
Thu 05/28/09 08:17 AM

Before Not

A time before, not too long,
in the scheme of eternal and distance,
she took her usual place on the rock.
The tide could not touch her
for she had chosen this place
to keep her from getting her feet wet,
unless it was her mood to do so.
From her vantage point she surmised
life as only she would know.
From a distance unknowingly,
she was observed.
The same question came to mind
of he who had been viewing her usual.
Why does she sit there, day in and day out,
no matter the sky, no matter the season?

Not has held her captive,
Even from the waves.
Who can know to save her?
She sits upon her grave.

Raine Les 5/27/2009



A work you can be proud of.:smile:

MzEm's photo
Thu 05/28/09 12:56 PM

<3~Sorrowful Tears Turned To Joy~<3

Her radiance is beaming as I dreamily stare
Her whispers have fallen with love and care
Such heartfelt yearning while sitting alone
Faithful are my ears for her miniscule tone

I listen ever closely for her gental sighs
Falling from her eyes,salty tears were cried
Weakened & weeping from a past that had died
Too little of joy,and many filled with lies

Tonight sweet tears fall as if they were rain
Waves cascade over her as her new day is born
Her profound sadness once felt now has gone
No more does her heart leave sorrow nurturing

Listen closely;can U hear the birds chirping?
Such melodic sound carried within their flight
A warm blanket of air caresses her skin toniht
The tides of soothing calmness washes over her

Her evening tears have now become a sea sponge
Trapped endlessly upon the harsh baking sand
No longer shall she ponder sorrow perpetually
Time falls mercifully quick when allowed reign

She welcomes a new day as the sun gently rises
A majestic rainbow curls & hovers over the East
The seagulls yelp & dip endlessly within ritual
Steadfast and faithfully overlooking the ocean

My heavenly sight;few will ever witness sadly
A gentle breeze carries her soft loving whisper
Longing for a gentle man to capture her heart
Her smile casts a glow for a starking distance

I stand before her naked,drenched and cleansed
A glorious new beginning racing to wards them
I am not faint at heart as I embrace her whole
2 fearless hearts,minds & bodies upon 1 journey

Lovingly written by CyPoet aka Cybear 3/14/07
:smile: flowerforyou {{{{bear~hug}}} ;=)


Great write CyPoet...