eyes closed
hot quiet tears
sliding
gliding
down a face
wracked in pain
teeth clenched
tightly
dont leave me
again

solitary whispers
silent cries
in the dark
forever’s first
and only
respite
knowing with
shattering certainty
it’s the first night

blood rush roar
loud in ears
gasping breath
panting in fear
echoes loudly
resounding
a broken heart
pounding with
a knee jerk rush of
realization
it’s the first night
its the first night alone

without you

awh@2007

great peice of work

((( Ms Wiz )))))

Deeply missing you,,,,

Lovely!!

powerful revision Alicia

Thank you LilyPetal, I appreciate it~

Thank you as well Mekikis~I'm glad you enjoyed this~

I miss you too darling

Thank you Sweetheart~I'm tightening my pages here

Very nice MsWiz

Hello Sunshine, how have you been handsome?

Hello Lovely , i've been good

Nice to see you

I like the energy created by your repetition of

"It's the first night",

leading one to the unexpected destination of

"its the first night alone
without you".

THAT is how momentum is achieved, folks!

GM Wizz...

Heartfelt

Girl as always beautiful write straight from the heart.

Thank you Madame~

AngelFace, good morning my lamb~

Hello Lovely Txy, I appreciate it darlin~

missed you (((A)))

(((HENRY))) I've been editing for what seems like forever! I'll be around a little more~how are you darlin'?