Topic: An after sex "I love you Rachel" to Stephanie
d4tc's photo
Thu 02/04/10 05:05 PM

Oh Noooo!
He Didnt!

Oh Yes!
He Did!

no suprise for me
its easy to believe
what I said.

Im Fukcen Fukced.

She Fukcen Fukced Me.

stuck me under a bus
where she shoved me.

from incomplete
speech
a leak speaks
deep in
cracked concrete

on HER
no longer
on OUR

we loitered.

dishonored sidewalk
inner thoughts
she thinked
I stinked
her reason

I was spoiled.

making me look
like leftovers

wrapped up
as a tinman
with the heart
of a scarecrow

FOILED!

too perfect for me to
not be nervous i shall
share this with a shreik.

in her innermind
I assure you
I assurely shrinked.

as distinct
as worthless.

loud and unclear
I hear the screech
of a bus that must
have just scuffed
this man.

damn near almost
crushed this man.

I backflipped up
lips front
cuffed
happy
as i was
she shoved me.

an exchange of
cussings.

love crushed crumbling.
us fumbling, me stumbling.

"I had a ring!"

damn near almost
buried the thing.

my worst nightmare
alas murdered
by HER dream.

so obsene
in comparison
to my dream,

a scene unseen.

wishes
welled.

a finger
less swollen

escaping
such hell.


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Thu 02/04/10 05:25 PM
noway WOW,,,This was very PAINFUL,,,ouch,,,,wink,lol
NICE WRITE BRO....drinker drinker

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Thu 02/04/10 05:59 PM
This is great. the only lines I smelled a rat in were

"Im Fukcen Fukced.

She Fukcen Fukced Me." LOL!

But I love this. I really do!

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Thu 02/04/10 06:33 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Fri 02/05/10 04:22 AM
very nice J:thumbsup:

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Fri 02/05/10 07:00 AM
:heart:

kc0003's photo
Fri 02/05/10 07:03 AM
very revealing...drinker

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Fri 02/05/10 12:24 PM
flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 02/05/10 11:22 PM
ohhhhhh noooooooooooooo ... you didn't



but I love the piece flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sat 02/06/10 12:15 AM
alright homie great shiit