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Edited by
Ainjel
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Sat 10/15/11 12:21 AM
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You have reached the end
of a tether bound tightly holding you close yet not near enough Emotions scream madness so it seems at the time of grace ~ or is it prayer when ground is hit To never know nor hear if it is so or it is no you have it wrong I'm not surprised Un~nerving or so it seems feet flat on ground green grass preferably but not such a biggie Finally appears the suppos~ed ending of such a prose or is it ramblings from a wineglass carved intricate of crystal You tell me...  ©Ainjel |
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Edited by
tophat8
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Sat 10/15/11 01:52 AM
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Pretty deep poetry.....
Not bound but alone.... Not lonely..... The idea of ground being hit is better than ones head in the clouds with unrealistic expectations..... Grass between toes gives grounding to our relationship with our being here..... The wine glass is just a place of vision... Deluded or clear..... |
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Pretty deep poetry..... Not bound but alone.... Not lonely..... The idea of ground being hit is better than ones head in the clouds with unrealistic expectations..... Grass between toes gives grounding to our relationship with our being here..... The wine glass is just a place of vision... Deduded or clear..... You are awesome..Thankyou..I was eating a peanut butter sandwich when those words came into my head.. 
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Pretty deep poetry..... Not bound but alone.... Not lonely..... The idea of ground being hit is better than ones head in the clouds with unrealistic expectations..... Grass between toes gives grounding to our relationship with our being here..... The wine glass is just a place of vision... Deduded or clear..... You are awesome..Thankyou..I was eating a peanut butter sandwich when those words came into my head.. |
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No..... Thankyou for your thought provoking piece of work! Nice to see here!
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Nice write....
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Nice :-)
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Peanut butter sandwiches are good brain food. Nice poem.
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nicely done...
it's great to get a glimpse fro time to time. keep it coming.  |
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Thanks everyone..Tiz now Sunday morning 10.35am, and a beautiful Spring day here in NZ..
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Nice write :)
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 Good write |
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I so enjoy you
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I love this. You must be eating some incredible peanut butter sandwiches to fuel your creativity. The view is quite beautiful through your wine glass.
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You have reached the end of a tether bound tightly holding you close yet not near enough Emotions scream madness so it seems at the time of grace ~ or is it prayer when ground is hit To never know nor hear if it is so or it is no you have it wrong I'm not surprised Un~nerving or so it seems feet flat on ground green grass preferably but not such a biggie Finally appears the suppos~ed ending of such a prose or is it ramblings from a wineglass carved intricate of crystal You tell me... ©Ainjel I want more... |
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Elusively exclusive!
Reluctantly assertive! I LOVE IT!!!!!   and I love peanut butter, 
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Pretty deep poetry..... Not bound but alone.... Not lonely..... The idea of ground being hit is better than ones head in the clouds with unrealistic expectations..... Grass between toes gives grounding to our relationship with our being here..... The wine glass is just a place of vision... Deduded or clear..... You are awesome..Thankyou..I was eating a peanut butter sandwich when those words came into my head.. Ok so it's 6:03am here and I'm about to eat a peanut butter snadwich because I want to write like this!!!!! Did you add jelly? I'm kind of partial to PB and J |
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You have reached the end of a tether bound tightly holding you close yet not near enough Emotions scream madness so it seems at the time of grace ~ or is it prayer when ground is hit To never know nor hear if it is so or it is no you have it wrong I'm not surprised Un~nerving or so it seems feet flat on ground green grass preferably but not such a biggie Finally appears the suppos~ed ending of such a prose or is it ramblings from a wineglass carved intricate of crystal You tell me... ©Ainjel Unrequited love...the beautifully cut crystal glass stands empty, no colors of the rainbow reflect in the glaring light of Sunday morn....Very nice Ainjel..
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