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Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Sun 06/24/12 10:12 PM
Consumed with hate and misery, you crash and burn like fighter jet. As I dwell in the house of love, I rise above like a rocket. Yeah, I'm high like a satellite and you're too low, missed your flight. Grab your shades, I'm too bright. Your lights out, like the night.

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sun 06/24/12 11:03 PM
Cool write.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Mon 06/25/12 12:20 AM
Totage, I know poetry expresses our feelings at the time. I just find this is a strange poem if you are 'trully in the house of love.' Love does not delight in evil. May God bless you my brother.

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Mon 06/25/12 06:03 AM
Not a delight in evil at all.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 06/25/12 06:23 AM
Consumed with hate and misery, you crash and burn like fighter jet. As I dwell in the house of love, I rise above like a rocket. Yeah, I'm high like a satellite and you're too low, missed your flight. Grab your shades, I'm too bright. Your lights out, like the night. What I read....Hate does not beget hate...Very nice Totage...

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poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Mon 06/25/12 01:34 PM
Interesting play with words

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