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Topic: A Touched Soul.
JaideStar's photo
Fri 04/15/16 05:49 PM
The blush of newly fallen snow touches
the surroundings with it's beauty like
the soul is touched by a gentle kiss.
A whisper upon cool lips,
heated to make one melt like that of
the spring time sun.
In satisfaction a red blush of
joy spreads across ones face
like that of a setting sun, contentment
for all who are blessed by the beauty of both.


Written Dec 1st, 2008
(All of my poetry is published on line in Deviant Art.)
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Sat 04/16/16 01:13 AM
Lovely... flowerforyou
technovative's photo
Sat 04/16/16 12:12 PM
It's a really pretty piece JaideStar.
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Sat 04/16/16 12:56 PM
Nice flowerforyou
JaideStar's photo
Fri 04/29/16 03:00 PM
Thanks :) I usually don't post stuff outside of DA but thought ... why not LOL :)
Ladywind7's photo
Fri 04/29/16 05:27 PM
Gorgeous imagery. Your words and poem touched my soul with that brush of innocence and wonder.
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Sat 04/30/16 04:56 PM
Keep posting, very nice
mzrosie's photo
Sun 05/01/16 06:37 PM
Lovely poem flowerforyou
SitkaRains's photo
Sun 05/01/16 06:59 PM
Lovely so talentedflowerforyou
UrMissingLib's photo
Mon 05/02/16 06:16 AM
Simple but deep. Lovely.
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Mon 05/02/16 06:34 AM
lovely.flowerforyou
Robxbox73's photo
Mon 05/02/16 07:18 AM
Very moving. Thank you.
2gethet4ever's photo
Tue 05/10/16 12:42 PM
Good poetry is what I live and breathe for it tantalizes me!
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Fri 10/08/21 02:57 AM
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JulieABush's photo
Fri 10/08/21 03:40 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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