The morning Sun brings forth a brilliant light that gives hope to all who gaze upon it, a new chance to change what yesterday did not provide.
Looking up things never stay the same as the immortal owner would never allow it, time is not something that ever moves forward yet never stays in one moment.
Make the best of your own natural time and spend the days bringing fulfillment to your being, spread the sun to those who have been lost in the dark and show them the light of a new day.
Give them your strength and wisdom, you shall live on forever through them.

Inspirational

Nice poem .

Hi Paul. I think your words are kind, beautiful and strong in their impact.

May I ask why you do not make shorter, more pause in your sentences?
Are you on a cellphone?

I remember my very first poem here I posted on Mingle, I wrote in one continuous line, not knowing what I wrote was coming across like that.

If you will permit me to, I want to use your amazing poem, to use pauses, to make it more forceful.

Up to you



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