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Topic: ~~Here I Sit~~
ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Mon 01/14/08 11:04 PM
Quietly, I sit, My shoulders are slouched, This room dimly lit, Alone on this couch. My heart on a shelf, It does not mingle, Thinking to myself, That's why I'm single. Ringing in my ear, That, silence can do, Brings the feeling near, Of sadness so true. Someone grab my heart, And hold on tightly, Just give it a start, Shake it up nightly. Patiently, I wait, Still sitting right here, Never be too late, To have his heart near. 1/15/08

BeckaLeann Joined Thu 01/10/08 Posts: 111	Mon 01/14/08 11:06 PM
thats lovely you're very talented

justkev08 Joined Tue 12/18/07 Posts: 1897	Mon 01/14/08 11:09 PM
nice

ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Mon 01/14/08 11:11 PM
thanx Becka and Kev

BeckaLeann Joined Thu 01/10/08 Posts: 111	Mon 01/14/08 11:13 PM
you're very welcome

NatalieHalla Joined Tue 11/14/06 Posts: 199	Mon 01/14/08 11:18 PM
kick ass poem...very true~

ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Mon 01/14/08 11:26 PM
thanx Natalie

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 01/15/08 08:12 AM
Beautiful

lonelyheart36 Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 470	Tue 01/15/08 08:26 AM
Quietly, I sit, My shoulders are slouched, This room dimly lit, Alone on this couch. My heart on a shelf, It does not mingle, Thinking to myself, That's why I'm single. Ringing in my ear, That, silence can do, Brings the feeling near, Of sadness so true. Someone grab my heart, And hold on tightly, Just give it a start, Shake it up nightly. Patiently, I wait, Still sitting right here, Never be too late, To have his heart near. 1/15/08 nice

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76353	Tue 01/15/08 08:27 AM
Hummmmmmmmm have had those thoughts many times good one girl

Mikey117 Joined Mon 11/20/06 Posts: 23736	Tue 01/15/08 08:28 AM
Very nice!!!

eskimo_nell Joined Sat 11/24/07 Posts: 3035	Tue 01/15/08 08:29 AM
Very nice!!! mikey im following you

KAY KAY Joined Sun 05/06/07 Posts: 1795	Tue 01/15/08 08:29 AM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 01/15/08 08:32 AM
nice ellgee

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Tue 01/15/08 08:34 AM
Good job....

ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Tue 01/15/08 08:47 AM
thanks everyone

covington Joined Fri 07/06/07 Posts: 1491	Tue 01/15/08 03:36 PM
okay now this poem is my new favorite ellgee.

ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Tue 01/15/08 03:37 PM
awww..thanx Ace ;)

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