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Topic: Lyrical Response Post
FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:48 AM

thank you so much for your praise
for so rusty a tounge i did try to raise
some lovers to hate and haters to love
and just stupid ditties when push came to shove

Stupid ditties is, as stupid ditties was,
but I don't think we could of made it without out ya because...
It takes more then just my perspective, to keep entertained,
and all of these poets, in one thread reigned...

It would be great to see you, come by again,
and remember, if you can, bring a rhyming friend...
This Is the Lyrical Response Thread,
everyone come and see...
Just how impress, to the crowd,
Your rhyming, it can be...

Well, I hear the blues a callin....
tossed salad and scrambled eggs...
And Aubrey I get a bit confused,
but girl, your poetry, it legged....
And I don't know what to do,
but as a vampire,
I've got your neck pegged...
Come calling again,
Goodnight Ben

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:51 AM
it is rather annoying
to keep hitting reloading
why don't they just start loading
when someone is done loading

s1owhand's photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:54 AM

well hello there and heres a quick stroke
to touch me like that deserves a good poke
so poke you i will and ill hear no complaint
consider me your own teasing saint:tongue:


i hesitated and dallied to sin
just building tension
it's fun to begin...

i like best a tease and a saint
with a couple of flaws
helps pay hell's rent

devil

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:56 AM

it is rather annoying
to keep hitting reloading
why don't they just start loading
when someone is done loading

sounds for-bodeing
I don't know why it doesn't keep loading,
or why, for so long, yes, it does cause loathing...
The only advice that I can give,
is, sorry, none, in this situation...
It seems that having to wait for loading time,
is doomed to be everyone's station...

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:59 AM
Edited by MsTeddyBear2u on Tue 03/18/08 05:00 AM
Heres my Rhyme...
A bit late this time...
Don't get pissed...
This post I did miss...
Its not night...
Its day light...
Raining outside...
Think I'll stay in and hide...
Hope today your swell...
and feel really well...

Teddy bigsmile

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:00 AM
everyone's sense of humor here
it is rather a please
you had taught me here
i didn't know that this could be such a breeze

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:00 AM


well hello there and heres a quick stroke
to touch me like that deserves a good poke
so poke you i will and ill hear no complaint
consider me your own teasing saint:tongue:


i hesitated and dallied to sin
just building tension
it's fun to begin...

i like best a tease and a saint
with a couple of flaws
helps pay hell's rent

devil


I've heard a couple of bad things about hell...
Like the toilets flushing from heaven,
can cause quite a smell,
and that the worst sound in hell, as far as anyone can tell,
Is a toilet flushing rainstorm, coming down by the pail...

I must admit, from the very first hit,
that hell sounds like wonderful place...
You can tell anyone, just exactly what you done,
and don't even have to worry about saving any face...

A place like this must truely be,
the vacation spot of the stars...
Hell, aint nothing funnier,
then watching em blow up..
as they drive in their gasonline cars...

And the biggest amusement, that I've ever heard...
(and believe me on this, trust every word)
The the ruler of this whole damn land,
Is the devil himself, Mr Slowhand...

And I wouldn't be telling you this,
but you should know...
He's standing right behind you...
so I gotta go.

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:04 AM

everyone's sense of humor here
it is rather a please
you had taught me here
i didn't know that this could be such a breeze

Ahh yes, that's the way it goes,
once you start rhyming it flows from the toes...
And the greatest thing about it, it never does shirk,
you'll find yourself rhyming, (oh my god) not at work...
But, yep, that's where the rhyming will be,
and its not as impressive to the boss you see...
Although, (seeing my rhyming) you know I disagree...
But it's great to see that you are totally in rhyming sinc with me...
People here are really great...
You can see that for yourself,
and yes their since of humor,
needs to be dusted off the shelf...
I want everyone that I can find,
everyone dares to try...
To post a rhyming (thing) right here...
To just...
let imagination fly.

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:06 AM

Heres my Rhyme...
A bit late this time...
Don't get pissed...
This post I did miss...
Its not night...
Its day light...
Raining outside...
Think I'll stay in and hide...
Hope today your swell...
and feel really well...

Teddy bigsmile

Miss Teddy, Miss Teddy, what can I say...
I'm afraid that you fairly impressed me today...
when your lovely rhyme suddenly came our way..
I thought for a second, I'd caught a sun ray...

I know that from you, so many words means so much,
and by placing them here, in my heart you did touch,
So blessed I feel that you took the time,
to place, in our lives, that wonderful rhyme.

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:08 AM
i can't believe that we made it this far
we are on our way to the sixth page at last
i didn't think that it would make it this far
did you
when i have been here from the last

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:12 AM
i will be back in just a moment
i need to take my son to the stop
i shall return in just a moment
and i don't plan just yet to stop

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:21 AM
Well have fun taking your little one to the stop,
I'm sure when you get back, that then down you will plop,
into your chair...
but, I can not promise that I will be there...
to respond...
Tho I'm really liking our bond...
It's just sorta that time of the morning you see,
and I know that you would probably agree,
that it's been a long night,
and it's been lots of fun,
and by no means, do I think that this is soon done.
I plan to keep this going on for awhile...
as with every post posted,
(like by others, and you)
continues to bring me a smile....
So if I don't make it back,
well, no one be shy,
you can rhyme during the day,
and if you say you can't, then you lie...
I encourage everyone to get into the flow...
and let yourselves go....
I'll be awfully dissapointed, if when I come back...
a few of us "Poets" haven't kept up the slack!

Now always remember the name of the game,
you can post what you like,
as long as it sounds the same...
and for those of you who may drop the dime,
someone else pick up for them, (yeah, every time)
and remind them that sounds the same,
means rhyme.

Night everyone, (tho it is day)
I've had so much fun (I'll be back to play)

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:23 AM
Edited by Michelle_1982 on Tue 03/18/08 05:26 AM
i just realized what i did
i didn't mean to repeat
may i ask for you to forgive
you can even kick me with your feet

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:39 AM
i take it that i am here all alone
for no one here wants talk
no one must be home
maybe i should go take a walk

though i like to finish what i start
i know for sure that i will be here again
i have been here from the start
was wondering when i would gain

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:41 AM

i just realized what i did
i didn't mean to repeat
may i ask for you to forgive
you can even kick me with your feet

That's ok Michelle,
I won't put you through hell,
I understand that rhyming may not always be as easy as it seems...
especially when your running,
got to get the little one off to school...
it can be pretty easy to forget the schemes...

Glad to have your little one,
finally off for the day?
perhaps a little bit of morning,
to finally in quiet?
I bet with the little ones running around,
it so often seems like a riot!

Ah, but kids can be the wind beneath our feet,
and I can tell that you love yours...
and if ever looking for lyrical rhyme...
children open so many doors!

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:43 AM
that is true what you say
they sure have a way
i have two by the way
one now at home while the other away

audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:46 AM
no rest for the wicked no sleep for the weary
im officially so tired my eyes are quite bleary
but soft dreams on my pillow wont come
so im back for another turn at the drum
hopefully the sandman will knock at my door
before im awake forever and more
so hello again and to all a good day
for you still here ill ask if i may
join in the fun and the sass
if youll accept this lighthearted lass

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:49 AM

no rest for the wicked no sleep for the weary
im officially so tired my eyes are quite bleary
but soft dreams on my pillow wont come
so im back for another turn at the drum
hopefully the sandman will knock at my door
before im awake forever and more
so hello again and to all a good day
for you still here ill ask if i may
join in the fun and the sass
if youll accept this lighthearted lass
sure you can join in all of the fun
i am sorry that you had such a hard time
the sandman must be on a run
maybe we all will catch him sometime

audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:52 AM
michelle youre a doll and just so sweet
if you see him tell him id just like to meet
him in a dark alleyto show him whos boss
and smack him a good one for all my sleep loss

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:53 AM
for a while there i thought that i was alone
i was planning on leaving in a snap
now i am no longer alone
and now i can going to flap

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