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Topic: Lyrical Response Post
TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/18/08 01:54 PM
Ohhh so you think your name is superman.
Telling everyone you have a plan.
Now let me tell you my son.
That you may not know but I’m the one.
Challenges you want to play.
Before long you will run away.
Over too the corner you will go.
And your little tantrum you will throw.
So watch out what you say.
For I will leave you in dismay.
laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh

s1owhand's photo
Tue 03/18/08 02:00 PM
well it looks like i walked in on the WWE
just passing thru and what do i see?
babes in tight fitting t's throwing down
challenges to musclemen
dressed up as clowns!

:tongue: laugh :tongue:

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/18/08 02:03 PM
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Sitngrin's photo
Tue 03/18/08 03:51 PM
Edited by Sitngrin on Tue 03/18/08 03:52 PM

Ohhh so you think your name is superman.
Telling everyone you have a plan.
Now let me tell you my son.
That you may not know but I’m the one.
Challenges you want to play.
Before long you will run away.
Over too the corner you will go.
And your little tantrum you will throw.
So watch out what you say.
For I will leave you in dismay.
laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh


Woman, my name IS Superman and that you better cheer
And while the thought is on my mind, go get me a cold beer
You're the one, this is one fact that I cannot deny
Oh, but while you're in there, make my pork chops, I like them fried
I'd hate to have to break it down and hear your girlish cry
One step behind and to the right, I'm sure you know your place
And always keep in mind, wee one, that you can be replaced

Say OHHHHHHH Say OHHHHHHHH. Now you may bow

~SuperDEN laugh

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:09 PM
Well Superman hear me loud and clear.
For I just drank your beer.
And those pork chops you wanted fried.
If you want those my dear you will have to plead.
But now that I have your attention.
I have a few more things to mention.
You will not see this girl cry.
See my eyes are very dry.
Just thought I would send you a cheer.
With your very own beer.
Now run off little boy.
And go play with your toy.

laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh :tongue: :tongue:

no photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:17 PM
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audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:18 PM
i have a thought just listen and see
a tale of my night and all it may be
so open your eyes but turn out the light
cause what ill say might make me a sight

falling asleep head gently lay down
thinking how lonely with gentle frown
deeper and deeper in thought my mind falls
thinking of sleep that just wants to stall
gently so softly someone stroking my back
reminding me of all that i lack
soft breath on my ear, my hair my face
fingers questing as softly as lace
a little more urgent hands fondle my breasts
desire rises breath heaves in my chest
hands sliding lower to nudge apart knees
of jesus dont stop.. oh god oh please
mouth licking nips hand on my thigh
slipping up higher with my eager sigh
upon my pubis two fingers inside
tossing my head back i start to ride
oh god.'. oh god.. NO NO A SNEEZE!
waking up startled my dream just a tease
oh so desperate for a release in tension
thank god for manic masturbation

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 04:56 PM
hi audrey, glad to see you back
i have felt the same way as you
no one to run to not even to catch my back
you find out which friends are true

audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:04 PM

hi audrey, glad to see you back
i have felt the same way as you
no one to run to not even to catch my back
you find out which friends are true

michelle i love the new pic on the table
and the kids remind me of some cute faerie fable
its nice to see youre still sticking with rhyme
and i enjoy it all of the time
so what was you day filled with sofar?
take a trip?a plane? a car?
well g ive the kids love and a hug from me too
maybe not one but several and a few


Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:19 PM
my daughter reminds me of a third
third human, third vampire, third fairy
her canine teeth are sharp like a bird
has ears that come to a tip like a fairy


Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:23 PM
my son oh what a dear
so wonderful couldn't ask for more
hyper like a deer
pouncing so merry more

7Kate7's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:32 PM
Late comer to this thread, just got off work
Caught my interest so I thought to take a look
A most interesting way for people to converse
Though its pretty fun, and the new rarely hurts
I prefer slant rhyme to rhyming direct
Hope it meets the requirements my friends

7Kate7's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:37 PM
Day was hectic at work 'tis true
But that's always the story with Tues
Running back and forth full speed
There's always an animal in need
Nails to trim, puppies to vaccinate
And never forget owners to educate
I love my work, feel I'm fulfilling my fate
But when the days done, I'm tired, and rest is great

audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:38 PM
lovely ato see a new rhyming mate
coming at all is never too late
the name of this game is definatly rhyming
so please keep the thread with well worded ttiming
but welcome you see and stay with us please
to leave us right now would just be a tease

7Kate7's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:44 PM
A tease I may be at times, very true
But how could I find it in my heart to tease you?
I'm flattered with the reply and the compliment both
But I've just got to tell you the truth
I'm on a public computer tonight, oh the shame
And its kicking me off in 3 minutes, how lame
I'll try to return when I get home
But if my connection will work, I just don't know

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:48 PM
i am running out of rhyme
just trying to past the time
hello our friend kate
don't be afraid to stay...awake


audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:55 PM
michelle thank you
for help in staying awake
sweet travels in all that you do
come back for my sake
i too am now signing off
"ill be back" i say with a scoff


Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:00 PM
Edited by Michelle_1982 on Tue 03/18/08 06:21 PM
i will say see you later
and talk to you gater
when later comes around
now it is time to lay the ground

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:15 PM
yes! this has been seen by over a 1000
why haven't that many been responding
this has been view more than most
why wont you just put up a post

it is not as hard as some may seem
just start rhyming and you will see
believe me i used to think just the same
and it started to come to me with no shame

s1owhand's photo
Tue 03/18/08 07:10 PM
ahhh salacious taunting
appears in the dark
with dripping red arrows
that have hit their mark
taste them my muse
now aren't they sweet
vampires' chocolate
hungry lips
soon to meet

delicately finger
this slender bow
whose arching taut body
sharpened shafts throw
draw stretching sinew
to make them fly true
piercing a heart
warm dark red
streams anew

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