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Topic: Lyrical Response Post
audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:58 AM

for a while there i thought that i was alone
i was planning on leaving in a snap
now i am no longer alone
and now i can going to flap


lol.... flap away you rhyme posting bird
sorry my dear that was really absurd
what during your day will make you your fool
now that your kiddies are safely at school?

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 05:58 AM

michelle youre a doll and just so sweet
if you see him tell him id just like to meet
him in a dark alleyto show him whos boss
and smack him a good one for all my sleep loss
why thank you audrey
and the same to you too
and i hear what you say
i would like to say a thing or two too

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:02 AM
Edited by Michelle_1982 on Tue 03/18/08 06:07 AM


for a while there i thought that i was alone
i was planning on leaving in a snap
now i am no longer alone
and now i can going to flap


lol.... flap away you rhyme posting bird
sorry my dear that was really absurd
what during your day will make you your fool
now that your kiddies are safely at school?

only one is at school while the other is here
so no sleep for me not even on here
but the one here is asleep i wish that i could be there
i wish that i was there all the way over there

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:05 AM
Edited by Michelle_1982 on Tue 03/18/08 06:06 AM
this sure is a way to get our post way up there
so why don't people want to join in on here
this is way to much fun so why don't they try
it is not that hard, why don't they give it a try

audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:07 AM
oh everyone wants what they cant obtain
but believe you me youd rather obstain
from the life im living here at the moment
its a deliciously horrible torment
and to have babies to love and cherish
for me i would gladly perish
for one taste of that life i cant see
i ache for something that i know will never be

audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:09 AM
quite true, seems most would rather act the fool
than become engaged in an intelligent pool
so ill just pat us both on the back
and feel bad for all they lacklaugh

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:15 AM

oh everyone wants what they cant obtain
but believe you me youd rather obstain
from the life im living here at the moment
its a deliciously horrible torment
and to have babies to love and cherish
for me i would gladly perish
for one taste of that life i cant see
i ache for something that i know will never be

i am sorry that you live in such torment
that would be very hard for even a moment
i was told that no kids for the future
i thought that i was being tortured

was even almost forced to sign papers
for a surgery that would rape
me from all of the fun that i now have
i am glad on what God gave


audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:16 AM
it seems i want to hit again the hay
and today i hope and i pray
that all you do will be met with joy
(and maybe youll meet some super sweet boydevil )
buat even if not just remember to say
everything works out at the end of the day
i look foreward to seeing you soon
maybe next time i howl at the moon

audreyjt's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:17 AM
youre luckier than you know...
to make this rhyme... blow
my nose
on prose:tongue:

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:20 AM
it has been real fun chatting with you
i hope that we do meet again
i try not to brag on the things that i do
thank you again


Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:26 AM
for my problem i still do have
i know that i am luckier than most
i wish that all problems would come to a halve
trying to make rhyme...cost

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 06:32 AM
Edited by Michelle_1982 on Tue 03/18/08 06:33 AM
i feel that i am all alone again
i am leaving this for just a short time
feel free to let me know when you are on again
it wont take that long this time

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 08:06 AM
now look to the left and you will see
a picture that is waiting to be seen
there i am so proud of us
wondering what life will bring us

kkKen's photo
Tue 03/18/08 08:21 AM
I caught the flu
I'm sick of it
Wake up every day
Feeling like................poolaugh laugh

Michelle_1982's photo
Tue 03/18/08 08:43 AM
ken sorry to hear about the flu
i know that is no fun
how long have you felt like poo
i hope you feel better hun

Winx's photo
Tue 03/18/08 12:29 PM
My child likes to write poems. This is one my child wrote after being inspired from the poems that I read to my child from here.

All you may see is a lock of my hair,
But then you wonder from where?
It traveled across sea,
To come to thee,
On a full moon's night,
Across a seaship tonight.

With rain poured on it,
And true love upon it,
It's better than a thousand jewels.
As you should someday see,
It's the best gift anyone could give to me.


Not bad for a 5th grader, eh?

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/18/08 12:47 PM
I missed this one dang.
This is where the gang.
Is, sorry I did not see it.
But I must admit.
What a fine job all have done.
I guess everyone is having fun.
Just wanted to stop and say hi.
And leave a reply.



Awesome wrtie by a 5th grader tell them to keep it upbigsmile

s1owhand's photo
Tue 03/18/08 12:49 PM
bigsmile

this voyage
in moonlight
a gift
in the night

lock of hair
to remind us
of those
we hold tight

no gift
of mere jewels
could ever
come near

the feeling
inside
when i hold her
right here

flowerforyou

Sitngrin's photo
Tue 03/18/08 12:55 PM
You think your little challenge here will stop me for one second?
I think not, you know that lyrically, I'm quite excellent
And what's the part about you might find yourself pissed?
Just roll on the ground, having a tantrum you silly little sis
You throw what you have at me, you know a challenge I cant resist
And now that I have finished up this little challenge plan
Do I really need to remind son, *I* am Superman?

drinker

~Den

no photo
Tue 03/18/08 01:11 PM
so you learned to read and then to rhyme
like a baby's crawl you'll walk in time
like a baby bird that won't leave the nest
mama caws " this will be your only test"
and a push you fall such a silly thing
a bird trying to fly with a single wing

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