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Topic: I know.
warmachine Joined Tue 04/08/08 Posts: 4528	Thu 04/10/08 07:47 PM
What pain, let me explain, to know I love her unconditionally, what sorrow to comprehend that my affection for her is aflame, what torture to feel for her, but not know who she is. With great purpose, I reach for her hand, even though I am not able to see it, with intense care I brush her hair, although I cannot smell it, With great love, I slip a ring on her finger, though I know not what size. Truly I burn to pledge my undying devotion, but I know she cannot hear me, I seek to wipe any tears from her eyes, though I cannot see them spill over. I tremble at the thought of her being alone or afraid, though I am unable to comfort her. but I know, someday, she will feel my love for her. For the day that my eyes and hands confirm what my heart already knows will arrive and all the things I know now, will fulfill themselves in time.

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 04/10/08 07:47 PM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 04/10/08 07:51 PM
Good words.. Good thoughts, And GOOD LUCK with all of your heart... Thanks.

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Thu 04/10/08 07:56 PM


warmachine Joined Tue 04/08/08 Posts: 4528	Thu 04/10/08 09:15 PM
Occasionally my heart and brain get on the same page!

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Thu 04/10/08 09:23 PM
hmmm this is throwing me into a Shaespearian state of mind ... cool... I like that! Welcome to the poetry section warmachine

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 04/10/08 09:29 PM
Very nice thoughts war and welcome to the world of expression. Good luck.

warmachine Joined Tue 04/08/08 Posts: 4528	Thu 04/10/08 10:23 PM
Thanks everyone.

ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Thu 04/10/08 10:45 PM
awesome..thanx war

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 04/10/08 11:03 PM
Simply Awesome,, Welcome to the Poetry Family

daddydg_2000 Joined Thu 01/10/08 Posts: 108	Fri 04/11/08 12:47 PM
Very intense.. I like. I also think you should tell her how you feel...if she is real, but that is why i like the write..because I cannot tell if she is imaginary or someone just out of reach.

warmachine Joined Tue 04/08/08 Posts: 4528	Fri 04/11/08 12:58 PM
Well, she's not real in the sense that I haven't found her. But she's out there somewhere. The question is, do I have the internal fortitude to get those emotions to turn into words when the time comes?

daddydg_2000 Joined Thu 01/10/08 Posts: 108	Fri 04/11/08 01:00 PM
I don't think you'll have to say a word when you two meet. It will be in her eyes, and she will know...

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 04/11/08 03:50 PM
Niceeeeeeee...

warmachine Joined Tue 04/08/08 Posts: 4528	Fri 04/11/08 03:52 PM
I don't think you'll have to say a word when you two meet. It will be in her eyes, and she will know... That's what I think too! Thanks for all the kind words people!

celtic_kitten Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 9957	Sun 05/04/08 10:42 PM
Occasionally my heart and brain get on the same page! often enough they are on the same page beautiful words dearie

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 05/05/08 12:02 AM
I can tell this was written from the Good one.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76377	Mon 05/05/08 05:04 AM
good one

feralcatlady Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 35491	Mon 05/05/08 06:23 AM
So beautiful war.....thanks for sharing your heart with us....and keep writing......