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Topic: Forever and a day
pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 06/09/08 09:11 PM
Like an answer to a prayer You are always there Like a dream come true From the start I knew I"d give into your charm Disappear in your arms It's been so long Always right, never wrong To feel your touch I need so much Please hold me tight I need your love tonight Like a magnet you draw me in I want you again and again Help me unwind Body, soul and mind No worries No hurry Just you and I And lots of sighs Making our dreams come true With the things we do Loving you always Forever and a day

popcornncoke Joined Fri 11/02/07 Posts: 2088	Mon 06/09/08 09:12 PM
Very Nice..

JadedHeart Joined Tue 04/22/08 Posts: 468	Mon 06/09/08 09:13 PM


wraithme66 Joined Wed 11/21/07 Posts: 1909	Mon 06/09/08 09:13 PM
Aww.....

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 06/09/08 09:25 PM
Like an answer to a prayer You are always there Like a dream come true From the start I knew I"d give into your charm Disappear in your arms It's been so long Always right, never wrong To feel your touch I need so much Please hold me tight I need your love tonight Like a magnet you draw me in I want you again and again Help me unwind Body, soul and mind No worries No hurry Just you and I And lots of sighs Making our dreams come true With the things we do Loving you always Forever and a day Lovely...warm and gentle and a quiet plea of love...

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 06/09/08 09:46 PM
Thanks for reading always appreciate it

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Mon 06/09/08 09:49 PM


bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Mon 06/09/08 09:57 PM
Sounds like just about how i feel right now. great write ((Pam))

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 06/10/08 05:45 AM
Sounds like just about how i feel right now. great write ((Pam)) Thank you bigblue very much Sheri thank you my dear also

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Tue 06/10/08 05:50 AM
Like an answer to a prayer You are always there Like a dream come true From the start I knew I"d give into your charm Disappear in your arms It's been so long Always right, never wrong To feel your touch I need so much Please hold me tight I need your love tonight Like a magnet you draw me in I want you again and again Help me unwind Body, soul and mind No worries No hurry Just you and I And lots of sighs Making our dreams come true With the things we do Loving you always Forever and a day Beautifully written Pam..

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 06/10/08 07:56 AM


mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Tue 06/10/08 08:06 AM


tony39h Joined Tue 12/25/07 Posts: 875	Tue 06/10/08 09:05 AM
BEAUTIFUL

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 06/10/08 11:54 AM
Daniel, Robert , Marc and Tony thank you all very much

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/10/08 12:37 PM
Touching...softly intimate...

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Tue 06/10/08 12:41 PM
I love the way you write about love. Jiimy

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Tue 06/10/08 04:37 PM
Loving write! Niceeeeeeee! (((Pam)))

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 06/17/08 09:41 AM
Angel, Susan and Jim thank you all very much

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 06/17/08 10:45 AM


BrooklineBaby Joined Sun 04/27/08 Posts: 469	Tue 06/17/08 11:43 AM
It's absolutely beautiful............ Just beautiful.....