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These are TRULY beautiful------I have always had a GREAT respect for the Native American Ways, and have ALWAYS wished to learn more about the culture of the Native People.....
I strongly feel that the white man did the NATIVE AMERICANS a great injustice by stealing their land, breaking their spirit, and curtailing their ways.... Would LOVE to hear more of of your seemingly vast knowledge - all of you.........you can get a hold of me through Mingle2 to start........I would welcome your knowledge as well as your friendship. Peace |
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Phantom by S.T.Coleridge
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WOW - Awesome L.......
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As the Night Falls
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It is a frightful thing to bare when the nightmares take over. Myself I have never had nightmares but have heard of so many that do. One at times must deal with reality within the day to chase away the demons at night. Thanks - the "demons" are the actual "realities" of life that can't be "Put away into the deep recesses of the mind" that come out into the foreground at night..........I dread that time, and I also dread going to sleep because those invade my dreams......... But in time, all things change.......... |
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Hotel
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MMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmm it feels like you (the reader) has FINALLY escaped and is revelling in the newly found freedom, running barefoot, savoring in the feel of the grass under his/ her feet, and I REALLY like the idea of the Slip - N - Slide!!!
I'm a grassroller by nature........ EXCELLENT write wench!!!! Have a GREAT weekend.......... |
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As the Night Falls
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I can take a hint. I am still here. Will always be your friend if you want me. Ummmmm Robert - never mentioned WHO or WHAT I was talkin' about.... |
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The Colors Of Fall
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That reminds me - I still have the leaves I collected for you - I'll send them on down...
Autumn in New England (well, in my neck of the woods) is beginning in a beautiful crimson, followed by orange and yellow to gold........should peak in the Northern part of New Hampshire within the next week or so......... Poem matches well to a true description of the upcoming seasons........... You DO have a true gift with words Robert... |
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As the Night Falls
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During the Day the sun shines down
People go about their day with chores all around when the day is through it will come to you what thoughts you knew but could hide for an hour or two The night is falling this is true, she tenses up and fears what the night will bring this particular night. For it is when it is night that she is most full of fright, The fright of the memories she tries to forget. When things settle down is when she feels and she mourns, the losses she's felt the humiliations, the scorns. There's no one left to talk to, no one left that's here. For all who've said they'd be there, are no longer here. |
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She Cried
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She cried today Cleansing her Soul Whispers fade of long ago Stain filled cheeks Taking control Releasing the anger once plagued shell Shadowed darkness shines a light Worthy is her stained glass mirror Peace of mind is all she seeks Within the darkness thoughts unfold Cleansing her Heart & Soul once more Within the night the calm released She She Cried..... LAMom - That was so very beautiful. It reaches the deepest recesses of the soul......Absolutely incredible... |
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The Void Has Been Filled
Edited by
BrooklineBaby
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Wed 10/01/08 08:20 PM
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Hmmmmmmm Initially sounded like a job vacancy had been filled, then as I read on, I got the jest of it...(jist)...so much for "keeping secrets" and "The curse of JSH"....
Congratulations.............you did what you had to do to find your "true love"...........Now you'll have even more poems to write about!!!! You sought, and you found, no matter what, you persevered, and surprised us all - well done Robert...... Now you'll have to change your profile and break the hearts of women all over the country!!!! You won the best prize of all Robert - true all - consuming love!!!!!!!! Don't forget to invite us all to the wedding!!!! You'll AT LEAST have to post pictures so we can help celebrate..... |
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Good news
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Congratulations Robert!!! I knew you could do it.....
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Knowing
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That was soooooo beautiful-----and so amazing...........the depth of it hit me to the very core of my being.........I know someone who closely resembles pretty much every word you wrote.......a TRULY WONDERFUL person....... Thank you for sharing it........ |
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Untitled*****
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Oneness - exactly what this world needs - WOW - absolutely amazing...........did I hear something about Latte and scones???? Perhaps some "girly talk"??? I miss girly talk.......being serious, relaxing and getting silly.......just ......being........ya know what I mean????
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WOW - what an excellent combination of a poem/story put together......
Halloween is certainly one of your super specialties!!!!! |
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Pumpkins On Elm Street
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Quite good - mixes well with Spooky the Cat - that reminds me----has anybody seen her?????
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Twinkie The Ghost
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Very cute one!!! They all come together to begin the "Halloween season"...... Hope they come out with some seasonal smileys!!
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Teach Me Thy Ways
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I must say - this is a very powerful poem........full of strength and guidance - seeking it shows how time will tell.......time tells all things....especially destiny.......you are NOT meant to be alone, and she will hear and respond to the cry of the lone wolf, as the sprite would hear the cry in your story.....BUT......until you are prepared to love her with your whole heart and soul, she will never completely be yours, hence the cry of the lone wolf.......
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Early Halloween Poem
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BrooklineBaby
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Tue 09/23/08 02:36 PM
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So THAT'S where my cat got to!!!!!!!
Watch out - she likes to pounce on things - especially when you're not suspecting it...... |
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Reflection Upon The Water
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Reflection Upon The Water I love the reflection in the water But I don't like what I see, The beauty that reflects That surrounds the vision of me. The soft billowy clouds drifting Upon the light blue sky, With the suns golden beam As the glint catches my eye. It's the vision upon the water That's taking me in awe, The beauty that surrounds me As I see all the faux. It's like looking in a mirror But the water shows the pain, As the clouds up above me Gather in darness to rain. As the pellets come down The vision gets distorted, Nothing that I saw Would be as I reported. The rippling effect dissimulated The history I had seen, As I stand to take in the air The rain washes my spirit clean. Beautiful Robert....and then the Rainbow appears... She obviously knows you very well "Robert"----very nice poem----how someone can see the beauty that surrounds themselves yet when they see their own reflection they don't like what they see, the pain and suffering, the storm as in the story on your profile actually.....Sweet & Sassy is absolutely correct......."....and then the Rainbow appears..."........and the wolf finds his sprite and a new sprite comes to be the keeper of the Rainbow so the two can be off to their new life together.............. It flows so beautifully and perfectly Sassy...........Your insight is awe - inspiring - Robert - this could ostensibly be incorporated into your story - it could be your "happily ever after" - the "replacement" sprite for the one who found her love..... Kudos to both of you!!! |
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Here's You A Shovel
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Robert.... Bobbi can't control you any more. She does not have the power over you that she so desperately needed while the two of you were together. She probably HATES that she can't have you under her thumb anymore!!!! BINGO!!!!! Hmmmmmmm where have I heard that before???? |
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Here's You A Shovel
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Remember Robert, what you think she despises in you is what she most likely fears exists within herself....just live, Love, laugh...do not make her problem yours...it's not about you...it's about her journey towards healing what lies within her own heart. If you completely let her go, within the fullness of Love, nothing she says or does will negatively affect you because you will know she is responding from a place of fear (within herself), and accordingly, the only thing you will feel for her is a sense of compassion. This will replace any frustrations you may have; then, you will be free I agree whole heartedly - and on a lighter note - forget the forget-me-nots------I like the idea of the daisies |
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